Don’t dare to delve so deep, dear child, into the dark woods that you cannot find your way back… The woods are green and glorious, yes, but the woods are grim and ghastly too. The tenacious woods will trap you within themselves, closing in on you, climbing up your very toes, causing you to tumble terrified upon dead trunks of the dreaded trees. The tempting fruits will turn poisonous and pernicious upon touching, for the trees don’t pardon pugnacious people anymore, they punish. Every old root in the engulfing wood will make effort to entangle your feet and bid its eerie branch to ensnare you with elongated arms. The wild undergrowths, the warning wind, the waterless stream, and wilting flowers will watch you – the intruding wanderer – who wasn’t, and will never be welcome to the wilderness.
For these, are the silent survivors; the ones who made their way through the earth into the world in defiance of all warning, all whispers of brutal beasts armed with axes, ready to uproot and unhinge and unsettle. They escaped death, protected themselves and watched, watched, watched. They watch, and will watch. They are watching you.
For these are the survivors. And they don’t pardon anymore.
© Isha Garg
Doodle, audio by Isha Garg
Picture courtesy Pinterest
A dark little tale, I enjoyed it!
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Ah I love that Orville… “A dark little tale” 💛
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The choice of words you use to drive home the point here is excellent Isha. Of course these beasts with axes and not worthy of pardon. As always your doodle complements your writing perfectly ❤️
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It’s always such a pleasure to read your insightful and interesting comments Radhika… You truly tap into the essence of what you read ❤
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On the surface this looks like a lovely doodle and the words inspired from it, great writing as always, that goes without saying.
But beyond the appearances, beyond the sinister nature of the woods, ESP sees the guide warning the dear child. The guide who knows the woods and its dwellers, their struggle, suspicions and justifications so well, you might think he too is a member. An introduction to the woods the child is about to take a plunge in. Except its not the woods, but the world as we(along with the guide) know it.
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ESP sees a lot, right into the depths of the dark woods! The words that catch my eye in your multidimensional comment, are “warning”, “struggle” and of course, “member”! 📝 You describe my posts so well that I sometimes feel like using your words to explain them! 💭
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Your posts are multidimensional, you leave your readers no choice 🙂
Reading you is an immersive experience, can’t help these descriptive comments.
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I’m truly humbled and grateful for readers such as you! 💭 Thank-you for honouring my posts with your “descriptive comments” 😊
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This is one of the most enjoyable pieces I have read in quite a while. It reminds me of the story “The Willows”, by Algernon Blackwood, which was a critical piece of writing for me from an early age and is still one of my favorite reads on a calm, dark night…
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I’m so glad you enjoyed this post, and I will be sure to look “The Willows” up, since I would love to read anything along the lines of the “The Wild Woods”, which is one of my most loved pieces, if I may say so myself!😊 Thank-you for the kind words!
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A dark write done so well.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Scary!!!! Deep and dark!!!! :0 Love your drawing!!!! 🙂
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Haha, thanks Patty ❤
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Oh your writing,…. always depth of thematic content and a journey on which I happily embark. But there’s something more than meaning to admire, sweet Isha!
The delectable language here: the alliterative runs that meld so beautifully into the flow of this piece. There is colour in your doodle and even more in your words! I’m urged to read you out loud, and I succumb …. 😌💜🌸🙏🏻
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I was waiting for you to notice our mutually favourite literary device! Thank you for reading it out, sweet lady! Your comment always makes my day! ❤🌹😘
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And now, with evening smiles I graciously thank you again for another delightful chapter in the epic Ishaism doodle extravaganza 🌹❤️🤗
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Haha, I am all smiles here! Don’t thank me, sweet lady, it is you who deserves thanks for such love 💟❤ (and that last phrase) hehe
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Extravaganza is an apt word for the artistic pieces you present dear lady! 💗💗🌸
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This comment induces levitating tendencies my friend 🙌🌹
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I would say that this state of floating as light as a feather shall be a permanent state if you continue to compose as you do… 😌💕
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Soaring up with that now 😉😊
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The moon is beautiful tonight, gather the clouds as veils and spin free in dreams… 😴 ☁️ 🌚
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What an enchanting imagery, like a magical lullaby to usher me into dreamland! 💭❤
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💜🌸😌🌸💜
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A very well explained insights of the world with the aid of woods to a child , love the thoughts & concept behind the words complimented by lovely doodle artistry work.👌📝☺
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Thank you so much for your flattering and heartfelt comment, prashantt! 🙌 I’m glad you attached meaning in the sense of the world too, yet my only endeavour with this one was to spread awareness about the plundering of the environment… The inspiration came to me on a late night drive some time ago, when I witnessed a terrible forest fire… I wondered what if someday those trees spoke for themselves and were able to protect themselves, in this world itself… They probably do in a parallel universe! Nature is forgiving and giving.. Surely it won’t last forever, what with our attitudes towards it
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You’re welcome, Isha.
Right said & i am amazed to see your thoughts over condition of nature & creed showed in your words & art, infact i can now exactly relate the art with words.
You sketches are wonderful & words speaks in same page with it.
Keep writing & have a great day ahead!😊👍
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Thank you so much! You have a great day too 😊
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A very nice description. I really enjoyed it. The choice of words are remarkable and is good to read. Good job !
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Ah, thank-you for that uplifting analysis, Pulkit! 😊
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This was beautifully crafted. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you, kind Anand 😊
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I love dark stuff, this definitely goes into my favourites 😁
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Wow! I’m so glad about that, Sanskriti! Thank you
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You give us another interesting tale with a lot to ponder about. You have a certain character (I don’t know what it actually is) in your writing that gives depth to things and stories. Now this particular writing teases our reasoning and conscience at many different levels.. what a writer you’re.. !😊
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I like how you say “teases our reasoning and conscience”! Your words are always so pure and uplifting! Thank you for taking your time for this 😊
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It’s always a pleasure to follow your work. Thank you for sharing .😊
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😊😊
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Nice
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Thank you! ☺
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Beautiful write.
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Thank you, Jaya 😊
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Welcome 🙃
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Good descriptive writting . …….I really enjoyed reading this 👌😊
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Thanks so much, Sakshi 😀
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My pleasure 😊❤️
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I adore the dark side of your writing. It shows that all is not always goodness and light, and your artwork is always so beautiful and meaningful. ☺❤
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Thank you Walt! Your words mean a lot to me 💛
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As yours do to me ☺ You’re very welcome. 💛
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💛😇
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So Deep and lovely!
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Thank you very much, Saania! ☺️
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Excellent Isha, I love this good choice of subject.
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Thank you, Unique Tales! ❤️
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it’s a wonderful thought. you’re article’s connected to environmental issues and human activities. deep thoughts. Brilliant.
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That’s very kind. Thank you.
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I just watched the video and loved it! Is that your wonderful voice reading the poem?
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Thank you, Walt! Yes, that’s the second audio poem I’d posted. The first is called The Proud Rose, which I posted last month. So glad to hear from you!
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I love your voice! You should read more 😊 I’m going to find The Proud Rose! 😊
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You’re very kind, my dear friend! 💕
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You are an amazing poet Isha. I am honored to be your friend. Best wishes for a safe and Happy New Year! 😊❤
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You know that is a mutual honour, Walt! Thank you and may you be blessed with a fulfilling, warm and happy new year!
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Yes, I do know. Thank you dear friend 😊
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💛
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You’re very welcome 😊💛
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Your sketches are amazing, Isha!!
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Wow, thank you! I always have second thoughts before posting them because they’re so crude. Your words are relieving!
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You have nothing to worry about 🙂
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Thank you, Gary! Sorry I missed replying to this on time. Take care! 😊
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So charming!! You have the loveliest voice 😍
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Thank you, my dear one ❤️💐💐🌹
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Very lovely to hear in your voice and beautiful post!
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Thank you so much! That’s very kind.
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Amazing Isha! Brought to life by your voice.
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VJ, that means so much coming from you! Thanks a lot!
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So welcome!
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