There lived a pair o’ sisters plain –
one judgemental and one mean.
Said Mean, one day, to her sibling
“Judgemental, I say, you are terribly mean!”
Now, Judgemental with mute contempt replied –
(oh! that epitome of the smirk n’ snide!)
That bitter look made Mean’s sharp tongue meaner;
she cursed till it cut her own lip, like paper.
Judgemental scrunched her nose up so high in scorn,
it stuck. “Still better”, she judged, “than a lip torn!”
Both sisters ugly from within,
were uglier now for all to see;
both prisoners to their insecurities,
never to be free.
And everyone who saw them teased,
and tossed words bitter –
still, both sisters agreed,
they, would have done it better.
© Isha Garg
Instagram @author_isha_g
you nailed the characters beautifully in this clever little poem 🙂
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Thank you for your kind comments, John. So glad you enjoyed it! ☺️
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looking forward to more gems —
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btw I loved the illustration 🙂
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Hi Isha this is so very clever 💜
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Haha, thanks Willow! I really appreciate that ❤️🌹 Have a fabulous day!
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Thank you and you too ☺️
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😀 ❤
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🌹❤️
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Whatever it is but we can do better we can change to become better. Beautifully written.👍
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