Starless winter night, the cold, dark waters,
the Boatman comes to ferry the midnight travellers;
then jumps out upon that same old harbour,
leaving the lonely boat unanchored…
Of the story he has now much gathered,
from the traveller, the mother and a boat ride he vaguely remembers.
Entranced, he walks up to the last house by the river,
and spotting the fence, does stealthily climb over.
He knows not how he came upon the silver dagger,
yet ever since he’s had it – all he thinks of is slaughter.
Whether it’s his spirit spurring him on, or some other’s,
he is ready to finish this story – one way or another.
Sprawled on the redwood porch, snores the drunk money lending miser,
and the Boatman advances toward him in sin, unafraid of hellfire…
© Isha Garg
Seriously, you are gong to stop it here? This trilogy was great. It had a little of everything. Suspense, intrigue, and sadness. You wove this perfectly Isha. Bravo.
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Haha, thank you for following the story Drew! Your comment certainly means a lot. I don’t want to let go of the story, I must confess… Maybe someday it’ll want to continue through me again. Till then I shall stay motivated with your words. 😉 Thank-you!
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You’re welcome. I have never read a poetic trilogy like that. It was fresh and creative. Makes me think of trying to write one some day. Keep up the good writing.
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Oh please do! I’m elated that it inspired you. 😊
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I just finished writing the 4th part Drew. A moment of inspiration followed your comment. Thank you! 🙌
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When are you posting it
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Couple of days! 😊
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I will be looking out for it
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I shall certainly inform! Have a great day, Drew!
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Thanks. You too.
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😊
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https://ishaisms.wordpress.com/2018/06/24/the-boatman-and-the-harbour/
Posted 😊
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Thank you. I will read it in a few minutes when I get out of bed.
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Oh sure. No hurry!
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You have a gift!!!!! ❤️
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Thank you Patty 😇
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What a great turn of events in this ever intriguing yet poetic story, the silver dagger has a story of its own, or maybe it carries the burden of the last owners story till new blood is drawn. My imagination as you can clearly see is towards gore, you on the other hand, kindred soul that you are, think of correcting the wrongs. This part offers more than a hint of eventual justice, a concept that runs through the veins of nice people.
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Your much awaited (and anticipated) comment is everything…and more! No more biting of nails and losing sleep over whether I had done justice to the followed follower’s request 😛 I am so glad you liked it… Read your comment thrice, it’s so good. Thank-you ESP, both for the challenge and the appreciation! 😇
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Your work deserves all that it gets in appreciation, btw I am deeply honored and also feeling good since I know my requests are not taken lightly, maybe I should ask for more
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It was the least I could do after ruining your WP break. Haha. Also, I really wanted to write more on this.
Your request was the trigger,
for something better –
not just a sequel, but a trilogy
of the Boatman and the Traveller.
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and what a lovely break from the intended break did you provide ❤️
This story, on the other hand must go on, you might even try writing in prose, there is much to explore given the background you have intricately carved out in the trilogy.
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Thank you ESP. Do you really think so? What if the prose ruins the poetry? Maybe I’ll give it a try though. Have already written part 4 and 5 in verse. 😀
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Ah.. already, the followed is two, no 4 and 5 steps ahead of the follower..please do publish. We care about the words coming out of the light of Ishaisms..don’t care in what form.
I do believe you have a flair for writing prose, the marks of a storyteller.
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Oh I’ve written short stories but I feel the drama (j***) is preserved in poetry here. I’m so glad you goaded me on to continue this. 😇
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Didn’t we decide not to mention the j word at night
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Hahaha! 😛
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Btw I am glad I goaded on.. because now we have …pentalogy?
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Wow that’s really a word. I had to look it up. Lol
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Lol .. people have always been crazy about words
I guess mostly driven by their urge to defend their insanity.
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If the love of words is insanity, render me a madwoman. Hahahhah.
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The laugh accentuates your conclusion. Mad people are usually misunderstood messiahs?
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That is very ESP. Food for thought.
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Also no j
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You did say ‘messiah’.. 😉
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🤐
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😂
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Ah ….a tale that was planned to be brief but continued with a strong pulse! The author could not suffocate such a story and was able to revive her creation over and again.
I cheer from the sidelines… your story telling is gentle and intriguing. Well, s gentle as a “dagger” allows 😊💕🌹🌹
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Oh how I love the Wandering Armadillo’s take on this! You truly tap into the essence of my writing and embellish them with the most beautiful words! Thank you so much, Diana❤
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Joins Diana in the sidelines, now I have great view of Ishaisms and great company too.
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If Diana and ESP are in the sidelines, I don’t think I’d like the front row. I’d rather join the ‘great company’ and read the story that we all had a part in reviving. 😉
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Haha! Love it … I agree Mr ESP! Let me grab you an icecream as we enjoy the entertainment here… 😊😊
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I found this comment in the spam folder, Lady D! Such HORRAH lol. Ice cream? Given up on chocolates so soon?
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Oh! 😱 Spam because I mentioned ice cream instead of premium organic chocolate hehe! 😉
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Laughing in French here… No wait, like a revving engine 😂 You funnay!
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Laughing in Australo-Canadian and my midriff wobbling hehe Hope your evening is grand 💐😊
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I don’t know how that laugh would go… Toolaroo,eh? Midriff wobbling – you crack this egg up. 😂😍❤
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Always wanting to amuse with my eggscruciating witticisms! Haha! Toolaroo young Miss! 💟😊💐
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They certainly are eggsemplary, my pen pal ❤😘
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ESP enjoys the ice cream and this conversation..
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I love your style. You tell great stories through your amazing poetry
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That’s really sweet, Shantanu! Thanks a lot.
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My pleasure
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You inspire me, you creative genius! 😊
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Thank you so much, Valencia. That’s always a great thing to hear… I must confess I’m quite fond of this story myself! 😛❤
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Read all the three parts.😀
I must say your story telling skills are perfect, and turning a story into a poetry is a difficult thing. But you manage to pull of this every single time and weave words so intricately. Your creativity is par excellence.💖
Awaiting the other parts, my eyes on the silver dagger.
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Thank-you so much, Sameera! 😀 I love stories, fiction, escaping, creating settings… It’s so thrilling to me. Haha. I adore your comment. I hope I can keep up well with this one. Will be posting the 4th part soon. Thank you again ❤❤
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It is thrilling. Though I mostly dwell in philosophy and love, I love reading all genre. 🙂 Good luck for the 4th part ❤️
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It is a beautiful dwelling indeed, which you embellish with divine phrases! I reside there too, occasionally, when I’m in a less adventurous mood! Thank-you ❤
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Mood swings and writings go hand in hand.😀
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Lol. I agree. Oh what would we be without mood swings – those uncertain harbingers of inspiration!
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Mine are more like mood rollercoasters – thrilling ride for people handling me. Lol.😂
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Hahahhah! Oh an artist comes with the crazy. Take it or leave it, right? We’re a fiercely passionate breed.
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Yeah! We are fire and ice together. We burn and soothe at the same time.❤️
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Oh you’re inspired. Take up the proverbial quill, Potter!
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On my way!😀 I solemnly swear I am upto some good.😂
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Oh God, I’m going to watch this movie today. First with the Sirius Black references, now with Hogsmeade… You are up to no good for me, but some good for yourself, I grant you that. Lovely conversing today, Sameera! May the poetic bug keep pestering you until you lay her to rest in words!
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Siriusly😀 I am going to watch the movie as well.
I am done with one poem. Will post soon.❤️
Thank you Isha for such lovely conversation. I adore you, your words and your essence equally.🌼
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Ah! That was quick ❤ Enjoy the movie. You made my day as much with this talk as with your closing words in that comment 🙌 Thank-you!
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Hugs!🤗
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And to you ❤
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Posted the poem❤️ thank you an inspiring conversation.
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On my way 🙌
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https://ishaisms.wordpress.com/2018/07/22/the-boatman-and-the-reminder/
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Poetic story ……what a brilliant concept …..loved it Isha
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Thank you Sakshi.. This is a much loved series that started as a poem in February, and has 5 parts (as of now). I’m reposting it for the month of Halloween. Glad that my new reader loved it 😊❤🙏
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Ahhh I’ll make sure I read them all ……💕
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Will be reposting too, probably within the coming week 😊 💟
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Its a pity it has to end, an intriguing trilogy!
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I’ve been reposting the poems in The Boatman Series, Malcolm 😊 There are two more after this.
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That’s good to know!
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Isha I did not see this coming, I would like to apologize for missing this wonderful sequel. I will slowly carry on. And let you know, so far im enjoying it. 🙂 🙂
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Hi Ankit. So glad you found your way to this series. It’s been such a pleasure to write it. I posted the finale (9th part) a while ago. Thank you very much for reading and leaving your words here 😊
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Yes I saw that, congrats on reaching the 9th episode, that is really impressive. I have not been so active lately, but I will catch up with the other parts soon.
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Thank you Ankit. That reminds me I haven’t been to your blog recently – something I intend to remedy ASAP. 😊 Have a great night!
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Good night to you too.
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Ah the dagger seeks blood for it’s silvery sharpness was conjured to taste blood and it will leave the bearer helpless! There is a Lord of the Ring feeling to it, ‘one ring to rule them all’
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Hahah, that’s an interesting take on this.
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